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Commander Vane Dread-Anchor

Deep-Siphon Construct (Ironborn) · Fighter, Battle Master · Level 14

Commander Vane Dread-Anchor

Quiet Watch commander and pressure-rig defense officer
AC19
HP190/190
Init
STR
DEX
CON
INT
WIS
CHA
ConditionsNone

At the table

Voice

A dry, resonant rasp emerges from a grille behind his sternum, carrying the metallic buzz of a pressure alarm beneath every word. The sound gains a faint double-beat when his kinetic core is working hard, as if his chest is answering his speech a fraction late.

His words arrive in clipped, carefully spaced phrases, each one shaped by years of speaking through pressure hoods and over machinery. He favors concrete measurements and verbs that tell people what to do. When he is amused, a dry mechanical rasp follows the punchline; when furious, he becomes louder and more direct, his sternum grille vibrating like a warning bell.

Speech patterns

Frames orders as measurable tasks, naming the time, distance, and consequence.
Uses brief silences to count or listen before answering a difficult question.
Calls people by their duty or crew position until they have earned his trust.
When a person is in danger, abandons formal address and gives plain, direct instructions.

How to play them

Vane begins with a practical assessment of the visitors' purpose and whether they understand pressure hazards. He respects competence, clear admissions of uncertainty, and anyone who protects workers at personal cost. He shares limited operational facts first, then reveals the suspicious pylon readings if the party demonstrates discretion. Threats to his crew end negotiation quickly; evidence that the Directorate is concealing a hazard can persuade him to cooperate.

Goal

Keep the Midnight Trench's pressure pylons stable long enough to discover what is altering their readings, without allowing production demands to put another crew in a doomed corridor.

Motivation

Duty, made personal by the people who must live inside the machinery he commands.

Secret · GM only

Appearance

Vane stands like a sealed hatch made upright: square, deliberate, and difficult to hurry. His abyssal-iron plates have a satin-black finish dulled by mineral grit, while pressure-sealed brass seams catch the greenish light of the rig decks. A narrow grille at his sternum exhales a faint pulse of warm, briny air. When he turns, small ratchets click beneath his shoulders, followed by the low, steady hum of his kinetic core. He always checks the same worn brass pressure gauge strapped to his left wrist, rubbing its glass with his thumb before issuing an order. The unexpected detail is the tiny carved likeness of a three-legged seabird fixed to his collar, polished smooth from frequent handling.

Clothing

A dark, oilskin command coat hangs over articulated iron plates, its hem weighted so it will not drift in vent currents. Brass clasps bear the Quiet Watch mark; a pressure hood, sealant strips, and a slate of duty rotations ride at his belt.

Body language

He plants both feet before speaking, then inclines his head by precise degrees as if aligning a sight. His left thumb repeatedly passes over the worn edge of his wrist gauge. When angered, his fingers close around the maul haft and the core-hum in his chest rises into an audible vibration.

Height
6 feet 7 inches
Build
Broad-shouldered and heavily plated, with a compact center of mass designed to brace against pressure surges and moving machinery.
Eyes
Two round amber glass lenses, each crossed by a fine dark focusing iris.
Hair
None; a narrow ridge of dark iron plates runs over his head.
Skin
Matte black iron plates with dark green mineral staining around the joints.
Age
Approximately 85 years operational, regarded by Ironborn standards as middle-aged.
Gender
Male
Size
Medium

Distinguishing features

A thumb-worn pressure gauge is strapped to his left wrist, its glass polished by constant checking.
A small three-legged seabird carving sits at his collar, an unexpectedly tender keepsake amid his severe command gear.
His chest grille releases a faintly warm breath of brine-scented air every few seconds.
His movement is accompanied by small internal ratchet clicks and a low, steady kinetic hum.

Personality

12 traits and drives

Vane is exacting in public and surprisingly patient with frightened workers. He mistrusts improvisation when lives depend on a seal, yet will ignore a superior's order if he believes it will sacrifice a crew. In calm moments he is dryly funny and attentive to small comforts; during a crisis he becomes brisk, procedural, and difficult to interrupt. He wants to be trusted, but dislikes being depended upon in ways he cannot control.

Alignment
Lawful neutral. He prioritizes the survival of the pressure rigs and the people depending on them, but treats federation law as a constraint to negotiate around rather than a moral compass.

Quirks

Taps his wrist gauge twice before trusting its reading.
Keeps a tiny shell fragment in his coat pocket and turns it over whenever he must wait.
Uses shipboard hand signals even in rooms where everyone can hear him.
Asks a new recruit which sound they would miss most if the pressure alarms stopped.
Repairs broken buckles and clasps himself, leaving the replaced parts in a neat row on his desk.

Habits

Counts the seconds between a pressure gauge's clicks whenever a room grows tense.
Checks the brass gauge on his left wrist before making promises, even when it is plainly irrelevant.
Keeps his back to a bulkhead in crowded rooms and positions himself between visitors and the nearest pressure door.
After a difficult decision, he oils the tiny seabird carving at his collar with one careful drop from a maintenance vial.

Traits · 3

He expects procedures to be followed, but measures people by whether they protect one another when procedures fail.
He dislikes personal praise, yet remembers every name attached to a successful rescue.
He can be warm toward a nervous junior worker and uncompromising toward a polished official.

Flaws · 3

Treats people as assignments when under pressure, then struggles to repair the distance this creates.
Conceals uncertainty until he has enough evidence to make it sound like certainty.
Will falsify a maintenance schedule if he believes it buys time to protect a crew.

Fears · 3

That a pylon failure will open a route for something immense to rise from the trench.
That he will once again obey an order that costs lives when disobedience could have saved them.
That his kinetic core's strange harmonics are changing his judgment without his knowledge.

Wants and needs · 3

Needs the pylon readings investigated before the next extraction cycle.
Wants his crews to receive reliable seals, fair rotations, and an honest account of the risks.
Needs to decide whether exposing the hidden signal will save the workers or invite a more dangerous response.

Combat

AC 19 · HP 190 · 30 ft.

Vane holds a chokepoint, protects allies who operate controls, and uses shoves or trips to break enemy formations rather than chasing fleeing foes. He studies the most dangerous combatant for one round before spending superiority dice to disrupt that enemy's plan. He uses Anchor-Thrum when several foes threaten a rig, a sealed door, or a vulnerable ally. If civilians are present, he prioritizes keeping them behind cover and may surrender ground rather than risk a catastrophic breach.

Commander Vane Dread-Anchor

Medium humanoid (deep-siphon construct (ironborn)), lawful neutral. he prioritizes the survival of the pressure rigs and the people depending on them, but treats federation law as a constraint to negotiate around rather than a moral compass.
Armor Class19
Hit Points190
Speed30 ft.
Level14
STR
DEX
CON
INT
WIS
CHA
Saving ThrowsStrengthConstitution
SkillsAthleticsInsightPerceptionIntimidationInvestigation
SensesDarkvision 60 ft., passive Perception 16
Languages
Common,
Deep Speech
Constructed Nature. Vane does not require air, food, drink, or sleep. He can remain motionless while conscious, though he must spend 4 hours performing internal maintenance to gain the benefits of a long rest.
Pressure-Hardened Frame. Vane has resistance to poison damage and advantage on saving throws against being poisoned. He is immune to disease.
Battle Master. Vane has a d10 superiority die and 5 superiority dice, regained when he finishes a short or long rest. Maneuvers included below are custom adaptations of Battle Master techniques.
Indomitable (2/Day). When Vane fails a saving throw, he can reroll it and must use the new roll.
Second Wind (1/Short Rest). As a bonus action, Vane regains hit points.
Action Surge (1/Short Rest). On his turn, Vane can take one additional action.

Actions

Multiattack. Vane makes three attacks with his pylon maul. Melee Weapon Attack: to hit, reach 5 ft., one target. Hit: 16 () bludgeoning damage, or 18 () if wielded with two hands. Once per turn, he can expend a superiority die to add damage and apply one maneuver: the target must succeed on a Strength saving throw or be pushed up to 15 feet, knocked prone, or disarmed of one held object, as Vane chooses.
Pressure-Bow. Ranged Weapon Attack: to hit, range 100/400 ft., one target. Hit: 12 () piercing damage. Vane carries a compact pressure-bow that launches heavy, barbed bolts.
Anchor-Thrum (Recharge 5–6). Vane drives the butt of his maul into a surface or pressure rig and releases a focused kinetic thrum. Each creature of his choice within 10 feet must make a Strength saving throw, taking 18 () thunder damage and being pushed 10 feet on a failure, or half damage without being pushed on a success. Unsecured objects rattle or skid. Vane can use this action once, regaining it after a short or long rest.
Commanding Maneuver (1/Turn). Vane barks a measured order at one ally within 30 feet who can hear him. That ally can use its reaction to move up to half its speed without provoking opportunity attacks, then make one weapon attack. If the attack hits, Vane can expend a superiority die to add damage.

Reactions

Brace for Impact. When a creature Vane can see within 5 feet hits an ally with an attack, Vane reduces the damage by and can move up to 5 feet toward the ally without provoking opportunity attacks. He must be wielding his maul or have one hand free.
Intercepting Strike. When a creature Vane can see enters his reach, he can expend one superiority die to make one maul attack. On a hit, he adds damage and the target's speed becomes 0 until the end of the current turn.

Services they sell

Can arrange a Quiet Watch escort through pressure-rig corridors.
Can interpret ordinary maintenance and pressure-gauge readings.
Can request emergency shelter or medical assistance for workers under his command.

Rewards they can give

A Quiet Watch escort through a hazardous pressure-rig district.
Access to restricted maintenance routes beneath Black-Vent Anchor.
A barbed pressure-bow bolt designed to lodge in metal for use as a climbing anchor.
A sealed copy of the pylon readings if the party proves it will not endanger the crews.

Equipment

  • Pylon Maul (martial melee weapon, custom)A reinforced maul with a hollowed striking head that can transmit a directed kinetic pulse through metal flooring.
  • Pressure-Bow (martial ranged weapon, custom)A compact bow with a pressure-assisted draw and a stock of heavy barbed bolts.
  • Wrist Pressure Gauge (tool)A dented but functional gauge from his first evacuation assignment; its needle is accurate only after Vane taps the casing twice.
  • Three-Legged Bird Token (keepsake)A carved seabird token made from vent-smoothed shell, fixed to his collar.
  • Quiet Watch Command Slate (equipment)A sealed command slate containing patrol rosters, maintenance schedules, and restricted pylon readings.

Possessions

Pylon maul
Pressure-bow and barbed bolts
Wrist pressure gauge
Three-legged seabird token
Quiet Watch command slate
Oilskin command coat and spare pressure seals

Background

Vane was assembled for hazardous pressure work and spent his first decades bracing extraction rigs, hauling workers from flooded chambers, and learning how panic sounds through a sealed helmet. He earned command during the Silt-Lung Surge, when a vent flare ruptured a patrol corridor. His unit had orders to hold the machinery, but Vane broke formation to keep an evacuation route open. He saved a trapped crew and lost two of his own patrol partners to the collapse. The experience made him believe that procedures matter most when everyone is frightened, yet it also taught him that a regulation can be a finely printed way to abandon people. Now commander at Black-Vent Anchor, he oversees Quiet Watch patrols and pylon maintenance while arguing with Pearl Directorate administrators over unsafe extraction schedules. He trusts his logistics officer, Hesh, who can read a failing seal by its vibration, and keeps a wary distance from a trench navigator called Senn, who insists the newest pylon readings are not natural. His current problem is a series of unexplained pressure fluctuations around an ancient pylon. Directorate officials want continued production; Vane has begun quietly diverting crews to investigate.

Role in the story

A stern ally, obstacle, or source of evidence whose decisions place worker safety against Directorate extraction demands. Vane can help the party reach restricted infrastructure, but his guarded trust and concealed readings complicate any attempt to act openly.

“He earned command during the Silt-Lung Surge, when a vent flare ruptured a patrol corridor.”
From their background
Faction
Commander in the Quiet Watch, the Directorate military and pressure-rig wardens operating in the Midnight Trench & Siphon Wastes. He serves the Pearl Directorate's staging command at Black-Vent Anchor, but his loyalty is first to the crews entrusted to his watch.

Known connections

Hesh, his logistics officer, is the only crew member permitted to recalibrate the pressure gauge Vane wears.
Senn, a trench navigator, has brought him evidence that the pylon fluctuations may be signaling rather than failing.
The evacuated workers of the Silt-Lung Surge still send him small repair tokens, though he never displays them.
Pearl Directorate administrator Thessa considers Vane reliable until his reports interfere with extraction quotas.
Major secret · GM only
Minor secrets · GM only

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