The Ash-Cloaked Commander
The Ash-Cloaked Commander
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Voice
Their voice is a dry, carrying rasp, shaped by smoke, cold air, and years of calling orders across walls. It holds steady under pressure and lands hard on consonants, like a signal being struck into place.
Uses short, functional sentences shaped by years of shouted orders and signal calls. Their vocabulary is precise about distance, direction, and timing; personal questions draw a pause followed by a change of subject.
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How to play them
Offer a useful fact or a temporary truce before asking for anything. The commander respects competence and direct questions, but deflects requests for identity with urgency about the siege. If the party threatens the vault team, they bargain for time rather than make grand threats.
Goal
Keep the defenders occupied at the walls long enough for the small force to reach Ravenbrook Keep's vault, then determine what is inside before their employer claims it.
Motivation
A need to control the battlefield has grown from guilt over one signal that may have cost lives. They tell themself that knowing what lies in the vault is the only way to prevent another catastrophe.
Appearance
A broad, compact figure who occupies a doorway as if it were a position to be held. Their ash-gray cloak is stiff with rain, smoke, and old salt, its hem rasping over scuffed boots. Beneath the hood, a square jaw and unusually broad front teeth show whenever they speak; they chew fennel seeds with a slow, grinding motion, then flash a startlingly open grin at bad news. They plant their feet before addressing anyone and seem not to notice when others step aside to make room.
Clothing
An ash-gray hooded cloak over a patched brigandine, with Ravenbrook's faded gate-stripe colors worked into the inner lining. The matching colors are visible only when the cloak shifts or the commander raises an arm.
Body language
Stands squarely, shoulders forward, and takes up space without seeming to register it. Their hands move in clipped, practical gestures borrowed from signal work. When uncertain, they press their tongue briefly against one broad front tooth.
- Height
- 5 feet 8 inches
- Build
- Compact and powerfully built, with a thick neck and the balanced stance of someone accustomed to bracing against recoil and wind.
- Eyes
- Dark brown, steady and difficult to read beneath the hood.
- Hair
- Dark brown, cropped close and usually hidden under the hood.
- Skin
- Weathered olive-brown, dulled by soot and windburn.
- Age
- About forty years old; their exact age is difficult to judge beneath the soot and hood.
- Gender
- Unspecified; the commander deliberately keeps personal details out of reach.
- Size
- Medium
Distinguishing features
Personality
11 traits and drivesThe commander is disciplined and attentive to practical needs, yet unnervingly willing to spend lives for a clear objective. Around troops, they are brisk and almost encouraging; alone with someone wounded, they become unexpectedly patient. They distrust ceremony but cling to exact signal protocols, and can show an unguarded grin at grim moments because they find panic less useful than gallows humor.
- Alignment
- Lawful neutral, in service to a ruthless and deliberately undisclosed cause.
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Habits
Traits · 3
Flaws · 3
Fears · 2
Wants and needs · 3
Combat
AC 15 · HP 27 · 30 ft.Keeps cover between themself and ranged attackers, using orders and deceptive signals to split defenders' attention. They avoid a fair duel, retreat toward prepared routes, and prioritize protecting the vault team's approach over personal victory.
The Ash-Cloaked Commander
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Equipment
- Shortsword (weapon)A serviceable blade with a plain guard, kept sharp and free of ornament.
- Light crossbow (weapon)A compact crossbow and a case of bolts, carried beneath the cloak.
- Brigandine (armor)Flexible armor covered by layered cloth, stained to blend with soot-dark stone.
- Signal kit (tool)A pair of Ravenbrook signal pennants, a whistle, and a small brass mirror for relaying flashes.
- Fennel seeds (personal item)A paper twist of fennel seeds, replenished from an unknown source.
Possessions
Background
The Ash-Cloaked Commander learned fortification signals as a young runner in Ravenbrook, carrying messages between gatehouses during a winter siege. The keep survived, but a mistaken horn call sent a relief party into an ambush. The commander never learned who gave the false order, and the survivors never agreed on what they heard. Years later, they returned at the head of an attacking force, using the very calls and colors that once meant safety. Their current plan is to keep Ravenbrook's garrison fixed at the walls while a small team reaches the vault. The commander has kept one old relationship alive through anonymous parcels of fennel and lamp oil, but the recipient has begun sending them back unopened.
Role in the story
Antagonist and battlefield obstacle in the quest "Session 3: Siege of Ravenbrook Keep." The Ash-Cloaked Commander draws the garrison's attention to the walls while a small force attempts to reach the vault. Their use of Ravenbrook signals and colors makes them recognizable but does not settle who they are or why they returned.
“The keep survived, but a mistaken horn call sent a relief party into an ambush.”
- Faction
- Field commander of the force attacking Ravenbrook Keep; their employer and the force's larger cause remain undisclosed.
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