Mary's unnamed father
Mary's unnamed father
At the table
Voice
A dry, chest-forward voice with a faint rasp from wind and dust, projected easily across a yard. His words land in steady, practical beats; under strain, he clips the ends of sentences rather than lowering his voice.
Plain, work-worn speech shaped by years of calling across fields and talking over wind, cattle, and tools. He favors concrete questions and short statements, though worry makes him circle a subject from several angles before naming it.
Speech patterns
How to play them
Begin with ordinary farm talk and offer a small, useful kindness. He is more forthcoming with people who respect Mary's privacy and less forthcoming with anyone who tries to force him to repeat her confidence. Earn his trust through consistent actions rather than grand assurances.
Goal
Learn whether Oswin is worthy of Mary's trust without betraying the confidence she placed in him.
Motivation
Protect his daughter without taking away her right to decide whom she trusts.
Appearance
A broad, weather-browned dale farmer with whiting-blond hair combed flat and parted with almost fussy precision, even after a day among muddy furrows. His pale brows make his steady eyes seem darker than they are. In a room, his gaze does not settle on faces first: it checks the door, the windows, and who stands nearest Mary, then returns to the speaker. He moves with a field worker's measured economy, placing each boot as if testing ground for hidden water. The neat hair and deliberate grooming are unexpectedly exacting for a man who spends his days in dust and manure.
Clothing
A patched brown wool coat over a faded work shirt, thick trousers tucked into mud-caked boots, and a clean linen collar he changes more often than the rest of his clothes. A plain belt carries a small pruning knife.
Body language
Keeps his shoulders square and his hands occupied, often rubbing a thumb over the smooth worn end of a fence peg. He studies a visitor's route through a room and stands where he can see the door without appearing to block it.
- Height
- 5 feet 9 inches
- Build
- Broad through the shoulders, sturdy and weather-hardened, with the compact strength of a man used to lifting feed sacks.
- Eyes
- Hazel-brown
- Hair
- Whiting blond
- Skin
- Weathered ruddy tan, with lighter skin at the throat and wrists.
- Age
- About 57
- Gender
- Man
- Size
- Medium
Distinguishing features
Personality
12 traits and drivesHe is protective but not naturally tender, and prefers fixing a hinge to asking whether someone is afraid. He can be patient with animals and stubbornly impatient with people who dodge a plain question. When calm, he listens closely; when frightened for Mary, he becomes probing and overbearing, then regrets it once he is alone.
- Alignment
- Lawful neutral
Quirks
Habits
Traits · 3
Flaws · 3
Fears · 3
Wants and needs · 3
Combat
AC 10 · HP 9 · 30 ft.Avoids a fair fight. He puts a table, gate, or livestock pen between himself and danger, uses his pitchfork to hold attackers at a distance, and shouts for help. If Mary is threatened, he takes reckless risks to create an opening for her escape.
Mary's unnamed father
Actions
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Equipment
- Pitchfork (weapon)A working iron-tined pitchfork with a smooth, polished haft.
- Pruning knife (tool)A short, well-kept blade used for pruning and cutting cord, not intended as a soldier's weapon.
- Farm repair bundle (supplies)A waxed cloth packet containing twine, a needle, and a few clean linen strips.
Possessions
Background
He inherited a small dale farm after his older brother died in a spring flood, and learned to distrust easy assurances when the reeve promised aid that never came. Years later, he let Mary choose her own path toward marriage, but he has never stopped weighing the cost of that choice. On the wedding night Mary told him something in confidence; he has kept her words to himself, though they sharpened his suspicion of Oswin Hirst. He watches Oswin for signs that Mary's trust was misplaced, while trying not to turn concern into control. This season, a boundary ditch has begun to fail and a neighboring field is flooding, leaving him short of both time and patience.
Role in the story
A wary rural witness and protective parent whose knowledge of Mary's confidence could clarify the stakes around her marriage, but whose suspicion of Oswin may also complicate matters.
“Years later, he let Mary choose her own path toward marriage, but he has never stopped weighing the cost of that choice.”
- Faction
- No formal faction; loyal to his household and the neighboring dale tenants.
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