Pim
Pim
At the table
“warm as a kettle left near the hearth”
Voice
A dry, breath-threaded speaking voice, like paper dragged lightly over rough wood. Pim projects well across a windy road, but the sound breaks into clipped phrases after exertion. When rattled, the breath catches first, then releases with a small whistle; Pim keeps talking through it rather than lowering their voice.
Pim speaks in a workmanlike cadence shaped by years of calling observations over wind and fire crackle. Their sentences start with dates, conditions, and measurements, then circle toward a conclusion. After climbing or when nervous, their dry breathing rasp catches between phrases; when particularly rattled, an involuntary whistle punctuates the exhale.
Speech patterns
How to play them
Pim responds best to calm, specific questions and someone willing to inspect the stones with them. They are initially guarded if treated as a nuisance, but become intensely helpful when their notes are read carefully. Promise to preserve the evidence rather than instantly declaring what it means.
Goal
Get the smoke log examined by someone independent before the next toll inspection, and learn who removed its newest page.
Motivation
Pim wants careful observation to matter before fear, convenience, or blame decides what the strange warmth means.
Appearance
Pim looks made for standing still in bad weather: narrow shoulders tucked into a patched coat, a soot-smudged face, and boots with their toes polished by constant walking. Their breathing is audible as a dry, papery rasp after a climb, then settles into shallow, even pulls. When anxious, Pim holds their breath halfway through a sentence and lets it out in a small, involuntary whistle. One minute in their company is enough to notice a thumb repeatedly checking the waxed cord around their smoke log. They carry themself with careful, economical steps, as if every patch of ground might need to be described later. Unexpectedly, they keep a tiny packet of sugared fennel tucked in their sleeve and offer it to anyone who looks carsick.
Clothing
A smoke-stained brown wool coat patched at both elbows, a high-necked linen shirt, a belt with a waxed pouch, and sturdy boots wrapped at the ankles against grit. A bright sprig of fennel is often pinned inside one cuff.
Body language
Pim angles their body toward whoever is speaking while keeping one hand near the smoke log. They shift weight from heel to heel when waiting for a response. Under accusation, their shoulders rise and their breath catches; with a task in hand, they become steady and precise.
- Height
- 5 feet 3 inches
- Build
- Lean and slightly stooped from long hours crouching beside a watch fire
- Eyes
- Hazel-brown, usually narrowed against smoke
- Hair
- Dark brown, cropped unevenly and dusted with ash
- Skin
- Warm umber with a persistent dusting of gray soot along the nose and temples
- Age
- About 19
- Gender
- Nonbinary
- Size
- Small
Distinguishing features
Personality
12 traits and drivesPim is conscientious enough to keep recording when everyone else has gone to sleep, but doubts themself whenever authority questions a result. In routine work they are patient and almost fussy; when someone is in immediate danger, they act quickly and forget their own caution. They dislike being treated as brave, yet feel a stubborn flare of pride when their notes prove useful.
- Alignment
- Neutral good
Quirks
Habits
Traits · 3
Flaws · 3
Fears · 3
Wants and needs · 3
Combat
AC 10 · HP 4 · 30 ft.Pim is a noncombatant, not a trained fighter. They retreat toward shelter, put obstacles between themself and danger, and shout for help. If trapped, they use their walking stick to ward off an attacker and try to escape rather than press an attack.
Pim
Actions
Reactions
Services they sell
Rewards they can give
Equipment
- Smoke log (evidence)A narrow, weatherproof notebook containing dated observations of smoke, wind, weather, and the Cairn-Ring's warmth.
- Walking stick (tool)A plain ashwood stick, used for walking and, in desperation, keeping an attacker at a distance.
- Fennel tin (possession)A small tin of sugared fennel seeds, shared with travelers who feel ill.
- Watch kit (tools)A hooded lantern, tinder, chalk, and scraps of thread for noting wind direction.
Possessions
Background
Pim grew up in a roadside household that made its living weighing loads and tending small fires for travelers. Their first job at the Cairn-Ring was to keep the watch fire supplied and record its smoke for the toll wardens. For months the smoke behaved as expected. Then, on a cold morning after a night of sleet, Pim felt warmth rising from the stones even though the fire had nearly died. The next day the same warmth returned, and the smoke twisted against the wind. A senior toll keeper dismissed the first report as a novice's mistake. Pim went back, checked the wind with scraps of thread, repeated the observation, and wrote it all down. The dismissal changed them: they stopped treating a clear observation as proof enough and began keeping dates, witnesses, and weather notes. Now Pim worries that the odd warmth will be blamed on their carelessness, or buried because it could disrupt toll collection on the closed road. They still send a portion of their pay to their mother, who thinks the post is safe, and trade observations with Kett, a practical road mason who is skeptical but willing to test the stones. Pim's present problem is that the log's newest page is missing. They suspect someone removed it, but cannot tell whether it was a warning, a theft, or their own exhausted mistake.
Role in the story
A nervous but diligent witness whose smoke log can establish that the Cairn-Ring's strange warmth is recurring. Pim offers evidence rather than an explanation, and their missing page connects them personally to the mystery.
“Their first job at the Cairn-Ring was to keep the watch fire supplied and record its smoke for the toll wardens.”
- Faction
- A junior keeper attached to the Cairn-Ring toll post; not a member of any formal order.
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