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Eris Saravi

Elf · Steel Keeper (Stormforged Edge), a martial duelist and area controller; no spellcasting · Level 20

Eris Saravi

High blade captain and commander of the Iron Keep's defenses
“Where does the crowd go if this fails?”
AC19
HP170/170
Init
STR
DEX
CON
INT
WIS
CHA
ConditionsNone

At the table

Voice

Clear, chest-carried, and dry-edged, with the projection of someone accustomed to giving orders across a wind-beaten battlement. Her consonants are crisp; her breath is usually controlled and audible only at close range. When shaken, a single high catch breaks her breathing, and the ends of her phrases roughen until she steadies herself.

Her voice is carried from the chest with a clear, dry edge, shaped by years of calling orders over wind and iron. She articulates place names sharply and clips unnecessary words. When rattled, she takes one shallow breath that catches audibly, then speaks with a roughened breath at the ends of phrases until she regains control. The name Aurora, when she says it, is especially soft and rounded, unlike her hard-edged commands.

Speech patterns

Uses short, practical sentences when giving orders, naming the location, risk, and next action in that order.
Asks questions that test a plan rather than a person's loyalty: "Where does the crowd go if this fails?"
When speaking privately with Ezra, uses dry humor to soften disagreements, then returns to the point without pretending it has gone away.
Does not raise her voice to command a room; when rattled, her breath briefly roughens the consonants of her words.

How to play them

Treats visitors as potential sources of information until their actions establish otherwise. She offers a clear task or a precise question rather than empty courtesy, and listens closely to how they describe risks to civilians. Honest disagreement earns respect; evasion about casualties does not. If a visitor has useful skills, she may give them a limited, consequential responsibility and judge them by what they do with it.

Goal

Secure the compromised lower gate and restore a reliable evacuation route before the next iron wind season, without letting clan politics dictate who gets protected.

Motivation

To prove that a fortress can be powerful without treating the people inside it as expendable materials.

Secret · GM only

Appearance

Eris has the statuesque poise of a ceremonial figure and the unsettling readiness of a drawn blade. Her platinum hair is tightly bound in a high knot, with short wisps at her temples turning white with rime whenever Aurora stirs. Her aqua eyes hold steady even when the rest of her face is unreadable. She walks with long, economical strides, favoring no side, and can come to a complete stop so abruptly that people often notice her only when she is already watching them. In a role associated with steel and severity, she keeps a tiny paper-folded bird tucked into her collar and replaces it whenever it gets wet.

Clothing

A layered dark-blue command coat over articulated steel-and-leather armor, with pale quilting at the shoulders to catch wind-driven snow. Her gloves have reinforced palms, and her cloak is pinned with the nine-point mark of a high blade captain. She wears no crown or ceremonial train while on duty.

Body language

She stands balanced with her feet just wider than her shoulders, hands usually visible and relaxed near Aurora's hilt. Under pressure, her breath catches once high in her chest, then settles into measured, audible exhalations; frost feathers briefly across the air in front of her mouth. When angered, she does not loom or fidget. She turns her whole body toward the cause and watches without blinking until she has decided what to do.

Height
6 feet 1 inch
Build
Tall, long-limbed, and athletic, with the hard balance of a practiced duelist rather than a soldier built for brute force.
Eyes
Piercing aqua
Hair
Platinum white
Skin
Pale ivory with a cool undertone
Age
Adult, 146 years old
Gender
Female
Size
Medium

Distinguishing features

A few strands of her platinum hair gather frost when Aurora's power is near.
Her stillness is striking: she can halt mid-stride and remain motionless while everyone else adjusts around her.
Keeps a tiny folded paper bird tucked into her collar, a small and unexpectedly fragile habit for a fortress commander.
Her exhalations briefly mist even in warm rooms when she is under strain.

Personality

14 traits and drives

Eris wants every person under her command to come home, yet she knows command sometimes demands choices that guarantee someone will not. She is patient with questions and impatient with excuses. Around soldiers she is composed, exacting, and protective; with Ezra she permits dry humor and open argument; alone after a costly decision, she becomes restless and rehearses alternatives aloud. She admires courage but distrusts anyone who treats fear as a weakness.

Alignment
Lawful neutral

Quirks

Folds a paper bird whenever she has to wait through a meeting she considers wasteful.
Tests a room's drafts by holding a loose thread near a door before sitting down.
Counts the steps between a gate and the nearest shelter under her breath.
Leaves the last bite of a meal untouched until the night watch reports that all posts are manned.

Habits

Walks the wall circuit before dawn, checking hinges and listening to the wind through arrow slits.
When planning, places small folded paper birds at the points she considers most likely to fail.
After a difficult decision, asks a junior guard to explain what the people outside the room will experience.
In a crisis, becomes extremely still before acting; in private, paces while sorting small pieces of broken ice.

Traits · 4

Makes space for dissent before a battle plan is final, then expects the chosen plan to be carried out cleanly.
Protects the inexperienced with practical instructions, not reassurance.
Can be wry and almost playful with Ezra, but resents being treated as a political spouse rather than a captain.
When regret catches up with her, she audits details instead of talking about grief.

Flaws · 3

Takes responsibility for every failure within the walls, even when that makes her slow to delegate.
Can mistake emotional restraint for fairness and leave loved ones uncertain where they stand.
Will overcommit to a defensive plan once she has promised it will keep people safe.

Fears · 3

That another defensive choice will save the fortress by trapping people it was meant to protect.
That Aurora's power will become a substitute for listening to ordinary guards and workers.
That the clan will turn her marriage to Ezra into a political lever against either of them.

Wants and needs · 4

Wants an honest account of the lower gate's condition.
Needs the compromised evacuation plan corrected before the next iron wind season.
Wants Ezra to disagree with her as a fellow captain, not shield her as a spouse.
Needs to accept that responsibility can be shared without becoming neglect.

Combat

AC 19 · HP 170 · 30 ft.

Controls routes and sightlines first, using Aurora's ice manifestations and defensive position to separate threats from civilians. She favors precise sword strikes and spends Steel Resonance only when it can change the shape of the fight. She reserves Cataclysmic Recall for a decisive battlefield turn, following the exact zone effects defined by the campaign's class rules. She protects allies by making the enemy's approach difficult, not by standing still and absorbing every blow.

Eris Saravi

Medium humanoid (elf), lawful neutral
Armor Class19
Hit Points170
Speed30 ft.
Level20
STR
DEX
CON
INT
WIS
CHA
Saving ThrowsStrengthConstitutionDexterityWisdom
SkillsAcrobaticsAthleticsHistoryInsightPerceptionPersuasionSurvival
SensesDarkvision 60 ft.; passive Perception 20
Languages
Common,
Elvish
Steel Keeper (Stormforged Edge), level 20. Hit Die d10; Hit Dice. Steel Resonance: 6 uses, regained on a Long Rest; if Eris has none when she rolls Initiative, she regains 1 use.
Bonded Blade. Aurora is a magical frost-steel longsword bound to Eris. It uses her Strength or Dexterity for its attacks and damage, and its techniques are class features, not spells.
Weathered Memory. After a Long Rest, Eris chooses storm, flame, or force as Aurora's dominant resonance. Her Resonant Strike can deal that type instead of its usual damage type. The supplied class feature description is incomplete, so the additional mechanics of Resonant Strike are not specified here.
Triune Temper. As a Bonus Action, Eris can spend 1 Steel Resonance to transform Aurora until the end of her next turn, choosing storm, flame, or force. Exact additional benefits were not supplied and are not invented here.
Volatile Overcharge. When Eris uses Triune Temper, she can overcharge it so its transformation lasts 1 minute instead of until the end of her next turn. The feature's additional benefits by damage type were not supplied and are not invented here.
Cataclysmic Recall. As an Action, Eris can spend 2 Steel Resonance to create a 20-foot-radius storm zone centered on a point she chooses. The supplied description does not specify the zone's duration or effects, so those are left for the campaign's class rules to define.
Aurora's Manifestations (custom blade property): Aurora can shape nearby moisture into simple ice walls, barriers, and elemental guardians. These constructs are manifestations of the bonded blade, not spells. Their detailed limits are defined by the DM.

Actions

Aurora, Frost-Steel Longsword. Melee Weapon Attack: to hit, reach 5 ft., one target. Hit: 11 () slashing damage, or 12 () slashing damage if wielded with two hands. Eris can use a different damage type when a Steel Keeper feature permits it.
Multiattack. Eris makes three attacks with Aurora. This three-attack routine is a custom NPC action representation of a level 20 martial combatant, not a supplied Steel Keeper class feature.
Aurora's Ice Wall. Eris chooses a point she can see within 60 feet and spends 1 Steel Resonance. Aurora raises a simple, nonmagical-in-statistics ice barrier, up to 10 feet long, 10 feet high, and 1 foot thick, which lasts until the start of Eris's next turn. This is a custom interpretation of Aurora's construct manifestation, not an additional Steel Keeper feature.
Aurora's Ice Guardian. Eris spends 1 Steel Resonance and forms a simple ice guardian in an unoccupied space she can see within 30 feet. The guardian acts immediately after Eris, can move up to 30 feet, and makes one melee attack with to hit, reach 5 feet, dealing 10 () bludgeoning damage on a hit. It has AC 15, 20 hit points, and disappears after 1 minute or when reduced to 0 hit points. This is a custom blade manifestation, not a spell or supplied class feature.
Cataclysmic Recall. Eris spends 2 Steel Resonance and uses Cataclysmic Recall to create its 20-foot-radius storm zone at a point she can see. The exact zone effects and duration depend on the campaign's version of the class feature, as they were not provided.

Reactions

Frost-Steel Deflection. When a creature Eris can see hits her with a melee attack, Eris adds 3 to her AC against that attack, potentially causing it to miss, by turning Aurora's blade into the blow. This is a custom defensive reaction, not a supplied Steel Keeper feature.
Catch the Step. When a creature Eris can see moves within 10 feet of her, she can use her reaction to reduce its speed by 10 feet until the end of its turn. A thin ridge of ice catches at its feet. This is a custom blade manifestation, not a supplied class feature.

Legendary Actions

Measured Reposition. Eris moves up to half her speed without provoking opportunity attacks, keeping Aurora between herself and the nearest threat.
Blade Answer. Eris makes one Aurora attack. This is a custom NPC legendary action for encounter pacing, not a Steel Keeper class feature.
Raise the Frostline (costs 2 actions). Eris spends 1 Steel Resonance to raise a simple ice barrier as described in Aurora's Ice Wall. This is a custom blade manifestation and legendary action, not a supplied class feature.

Services they sell

Can arrange escorted passage through controlled areas of the Iron Keep.
Can provide tactical briefings, defensive plans, and access to fortress maps when trust has been earned.
Can request Steel Keeper support for a dangerous operation, subject to the keep's security needs.

Rewards they can give

A temporary commission to pass through Iron Keep checkpoints without delay.
Access to a guarded archive of fortress maps and old storm records, if Eris trusts the party.
Aurora can raise a brief ice barrier to cover a retreat, subject to Eris's judgment and available Steel Resonance.

Equipment

  • Aurora (bonded magical weapon)A frost-steel magical longsword bonded to Eris. Its awakened manifestations include ice walls, simple constructs, and simple ice elemental guardians; its specific powers emerged through Eris's bond and training.
  • Fortress command armor (armor)Articulated steel plates over a fitted leather and quilted command coat; represented by AC 19.
  • Command kit (equipment)Nine-point captain's pin, gate keys, map case, signal whistle, and folded paper birds.

Possessions

Aurora, her bonded frost-steel longsword.
A set of gate and watchtower keys.
A weather-marked map of the Iron Keep's walls and drainage channels.
A bundle of folded paper birds made from discarded reports.
A small, plain ring exchanged with Ezra.

Background

Eris was born into a minor Kiri-clan household that repaired storm-damaged gates and bridge chains. She learned to judge weather by the pressure in her teeth and to read a fortress by its sounds. As a young keeper, she bonded with Aurora, a frost-steel blade whose awakening reflected her habit of turning defensive positions into weapons. The turning point came during the White Gale breach: a collapsed outer wall trapped defenders and refugees in a kill corridor. Eris used Aurora to raise an ice barricade and simple guardians, holding the breach long enough for survivors to escape, but the sudden cold also sealed in several wounded allies. Since then, she has treated every spectacular display of power as a decision with a human cost. She now commands the Iron Keep's defenses and is one of the nine high blade captains of the Steel Keepers. Her marriage to Ezra Kiri, Master Rivaan Kiri's eldest son and fellow captain, is affectionate, politically scrutinized, and strained by their opposing elemental blades. She is currently trying to replace a compromised lower gate before the next iron wind season, while investigating who has been quietly changing the fortress's evacuation plans.

Role in the story

A formidable fortress commander, potential strategic ally, and moral counterweight who measures victory by who survives it. Eris can recruit the party to investigate sabotage, secure the lower gate, or negotiate with rival captains before the Iron Keep's defenses are tested.

“She learned to judge weather by the pressure in her teeth and to read a fortress by its sounds.”
From their background
Faction
One of the nine high blade captains of the Steel Keepers; commands the defenses of the Iron Keep, capital castle of the Kiri Clan in the Land of the Iron Wind.

Known connections

Ezra Kiri, her spouse and another high blade captain, whose fire-based bonded blade is both her favorite counterpoint and the source of their sharpest strategic disagreements.
Master Rivaan Kiri, Ezra's father and the Kiri clan's master, who trusts Eris with the keep but expects her to keep family and command separate.
The unnamed lower-gate watch, whose evacuation route Eris is trying to restore before the next iron wind season.
The other eight high blade captains, her peers, rivals, and the only people who understand what an awakened blade can demand of its keeper.
Major secret · GM only
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