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Aduun

Elf · Fighter 20, Battle Master · Level 20

Aduun

King, military commander, and keeper of the old roads
“A crown is a promise with witnesses,”
AC22
HP420/420
Init
STR
DEX
CON
INT
WIS
CHA
ConditionsNone

At the table

Voice

A dry, chest-deep vibration emerges through the mask, edged by a faint metallic resonance. His battlefield-trained delivery carries without shouting; in conversation he uses a matter-of-fact cadence, while formal rulings acquire deliberate parallel phrasing. When angry, his consonants scrape and sharpen.

His voice is produced through the mask as a dry, chest-deep vibration with a faint metallic double edge, as if a second voice trails half a breath behind the first. Years of issuing orders over rain, marching feet, and siege engines have given his words a clipped, carrying rhythm. He favors plain working language until making a formal decree, when his phrasing becomes carefully balanced. Anger roughens his consonants and makes him more exact, never quieter.

Speech patterns

Uses plain, practical sentences and asks questions that reveal what a speaker has avoided saying.
Calls people by their work or responsibility until they offer a name.
When angry, his voice gains a hard rasp and his sentences become more formal, not softer.
Says, "A crown is a promise with witnesses," when challenged about his authority.

How to play them

Mocus first asks what the characters need and what they are willing to risk for it. He respects direct answers, evidence, and people who protect those with less power. He does not demand worship or automatic obedience, but he expects agreements to be kept. If the party offers a credible lead about Azhourery or the buried engine, he will exchange access, supplies, or a formal audience for their help.

Goal

Find Azhourery before the buried engine awakens, learn what their father planned, and keep the dominion from becoming a weapon again.

Motivation

To make kings answerable to the people who live under their rule, and to discover whether his brother can still be reached before their father's legacy destroys them both.

Secret · GM only

Appearance

Mocus is a tall, broad-shouldered elf whose long black hair hangs in heavy, straight ropes, usually gathered at the nape with a strip of red cloth. His bronze mask is seamless and featureless: no eyeholes, no mouth, only a faint hammered grain like ripples frozen in metal. It should make him helpless, yet he turns his head toward speakers with unnerving precision. His long red coat is worn at the cuffs and split for riding, its dense wool darkened by rain and smoke; beneath it, overlapping bronze plates show dents polished smooth by years of handling. He moves with the measured economy of someone used to making a crowded room give way without asking. An unexpected detail for a conqueror: he carries a tiny wooden counting abacus and uses it to calculate fair grain prices, even during a siege. Within a minute, people notice that he never looks directly at anyone; he fixes his blank mask on doorways, hands, and exits instead.

Clothing

A long, red, weather-stained wool coat over overlapping bronze armor, a dark travel tunic, riding boots, and a plain cord at his wrist bearing an old family knot

Body language

He angles his blank mask toward whoever is speaking, but his attention seems to settle on their hands and the nearest exit. One thumb rubs a small worn patch at the mask's jawline whenever he is weighing a choice. He stands with his sword point resting just off the ground, never quite relaxed and never quite threatening.

Height
6 feet 5 inches
Build
Tall and heavy through the shoulders, with the compact strength of a veteran who has carried armor and supplies for centuries
Eyes
Unseen behind the featureless mask
Hair
Black
Skin
Warm bronze-brown, usually concealed by the mask, coat, and armor
Age
Adult by elven reckoning, approximately 340 years old
Gender
Male
Size
Medium

Distinguishing features

A seamless bronze mask with neither eyeholes nor a mouth opening.
Long black hair bound with a strip of faded red cloth.
A glowing orange blade whose light pulses once when Mocus makes a decision.
He tracks hands, doors, and exits rather than looking people in the face.

Personality

14 traits and drives

Mocus is patient with frightened people and impatient with comfortable excuses. He can be unexpectedly wry in private, but becomes ceremonially exact when issuing an order. He wants to be trusted yet distrusts the affection his crown earns; he welcomes disagreement until someone uses it to evade responsibility.

Alignment
Lawful neutral, with a growing suspicion that the law he serves has outlived its purpose

Quirks

Counts the corners of a room on his fingers, then checks the exits again.
Taps his mask twice before agreeing to anything, including a cup of tea.
Turns his wooden abacus upside down when he wants to think without being interrupted.
Leaves a piece of bread beside the door of any room where someone is sleeping rough.
Keeps small broken bits of pottery from places he has helped rebuild.

Habits

Counts food stores, doors, and armed people as soon as he enters a room.
Before making a promise, taps the side of his mask twice with one knuckle.
On ordinary days he asks servants and guards what they need before he asks what they have done.
When pressed, he stops moving entirely, making everyone else feel suddenly loud.
After violence, he personally checks the names of the dead and sends word to their households.

Traits · 4

He offers practical help before emotional comfort, then remembers the words people used when they asked.
He values honest dissent but can turn a discussion into an interrogation without noticing.
In private he uses dry humor; before a crowd he speaks with deliberate, almost ritual formality.
He is protective of ordinary soldiers and wary of anyone who calls a ruler chosen by heaven.

Flaws · 3

He treats his own survival as a resource to spend and rarely considers the fear this causes his allies.
He would rather carry a burden alone than let a capable person share it.
He can mistake a useful compromise for a permanent moral failure.

Fears · 3

That his brother's return will prove the famine and its suffering were arranged as a divine experiment.
That people obey him because his body cannot be killed, not because they trust his judgment.
That restoring the old dominion will make him indistinguishable from his father.

Wants and needs · 4

A reliable account of Azhourery's movements
Proof of what the buried engine does
Honest counsel from someone who is not afraid of his strength
The chance to protect his people without becoming another Morgus

Combat

AC 22 · HP 420 · 40 ft.

Mocus prefers to end a fight by breaking its shape: he uses Crownfall to scatter clustered foes, then focuses on the enemy most capable of harming civilians or controlling the field. He gives one clear chance to surrender. He uses his legendary resistance sparingly against effects that would remove him from the battle, and relies on regeneration to hold a chokepoint rather than chase fleeing enemies. He avoids the Edict against helpless foes, but will use it without hesitation against a monster that threatens a town.

Aduun

Medium humanoid (elf), lawful neutral, with a growing suspicion that the law he serves has outlived its purpose
Armor Class22
Hit Points420
Speed40 ft.
Level20
STR
DEX
CON
INT
WIS
CHA
Saving ThrowsStrengthConstitutionWisdomCharisma
SkillsAthleticsInsightPerceptionIntimidationHistoryPersuasion
SensesBlindsight 60 ft. through the custom mask; passive Perception 21. The mask grants this sense but does not let Mocus read ordinary writing or identify fine visual details without assistance.
Languages
Common,
Elvish,
Dwarvish,
Celestial
Elf. Mocus has Fey Ancestry, granting advantage on saving throws against being charmed, and magic cannot put him to sleep.
Legendary Resistance (3/Day): If Mocus fails a saving throw, he can choose to succeed instead.
Magic Resistance. Mocus has advantage on saving throws against spells and other magical effects.
Regeneration (Custom): At the start of his turn, Mocus regains 30 hit points if he has at least 1 hit point. If he has 0 hit points, he instead rises at the start of his next turn with 60 hit points, unless he was reduced to 0 by a wish spell or by the Ashless Verdict, the true name of his own blade spoken by his brother.
Bronze King's Edict (Custom): Mocus's weapon attacks are magical. Once on each of his turns, when he hits a creature with the Vorpal Verdict, he can force it to make a Constitution saving throw. On a failure, the target takes an extra 55 () force damage and is stunned until the end of its next turn. This is not an automatic kill; a creature reduced to 0 hit points by the attack dies normally.
Unbroken Crown (Custom): Mocus cannot be frightened or possessed, and he has advantage on checks and saving throws made to resist being moved against his will.

Actions

Multiattack. Mocus makes three Vorpal Verdict attacks.
Vorpal Verdict. Melee Weapon Attack: to hit, reach 10 ft., one target. Hit: 27 () slashing damage plus 13 () fire damage. The blade sheds bright orange light in a 20-foot radius and dim light for another 20 feet. On a critical hit, the target takes an additional 33 () slashing damage. The blade is a custom legendary weapon, not the instant-kill property of a standard vorpal sword.
Crownfall. Mocus drives his sword into the ground. Each creature of his choice within 30 feet must make a Strength saving throw, taking 45 () fire damage and falling prone on a failure, or half as much damage without falling prone on a success. Objects and structures in the area take double damage.
Kneel. Mocus speaks a royal command audible within 120 feet. Up to three creatures that can hear him must succeed on a Wisdom saving throw or be frightened of him until the end of their next turn. A creature that succeeds is immune to this action for 24 hours.

Reactions

Parry. When a creature Mocus can see hits him with an attack, he adds 5 to his AC against that attack, potentially causing it to miss. If it misses, Mocus can move up to 10 feet without provoking opportunity attacks.
Interpose. When a creature within 10 feet of Mocus targets an ally with an attack, Mocus imposes disadvantage on the attack roll and can move up to 10 feet toward the attacker. He must be able to perceive the attacker.

Legendary Actions

Measured Advance. Mocus moves up to half his speed without provoking opportunity attacks.
Verdict. Mocus makes one Vorpal Verdict attack.
Bronze Renewal (costs 2 actions). Mocus regains 30 hit points. This does not allow him to rise from 0 hit points; Regeneration governs that effect.

Services they sell

Safe-conduct through Duuran territory
A royal audience or mediation in disputes involving his roads
Military advice and a limited supply of food or field equipment, when his stores allow

Rewards they can give

A formal royal writ granting safe passage through the surviving Duuran roads
A custom bronze signet that identifies its bearer to Mile 8's watch
An audience with Mocus and access to the Ninth Survey map archive
If the party earns his trust, a loan of the abacus-marked field route to the old capital

Equipment

  • Vorpal Verdict (weapon, custom legendary)A custom legendary greatsword with a broad, dark blade and a glowing orange edge. It deals the damage described in Vorpal Verdict; its custom power is dangerous but never an automatic one-shot kill.
  • The King's Mask (wondrous item, custom artifact)Seamless bronze face covering fused to Mocus. It has no eyeholes or mouth hole; he perceives through a supernatural sense tied to the mask.
  • Duuran regalia (armor and clothing)A long red wool coat over fitted bronze plate armor, maintained for use rather than display.
  • Counting abacus (tool)A thumb-sized wooden abacus used to check grain prices, troop rations, and promises owed.

Possessions

Vorpal Verdict, his glowing orange custom legendary sword
The seamless bronze mask fused to his face
A wooden abacus carved by his brother
A sealed letter from Morgus
A folded map marked with the old Ninth Survey roads

Background

Mocus was born in the high country of the old Duuran dominion, the son of Morgus, a ruler later worshipped as a god by his own subjects. His younger brother Azhourery was called the god himself even while they were children: priests said the boy's shadow pointed toward tomorrow. Mocus was given the crown, the ledgers of grain, and the duty of making his father's grand promises real. During the famine of the Ninth Survey, Morgus ordered the royal granaries kept shut so the army would remain strong. Mocus broke the seals and distributed the grain. The soldiers survived, but the court declared him a traitor and his brother vanished in the upheaval that followed. Mocus found the featureless bronze mask in a collapsed shrine and put it on while escaping; it fused to his face and has not come off since. He spent the next century taking back the roads and towns his father had abandoned, becoming King Duuran to people who wanted a ruler who could be held responsible. He now governs from the battered river fortress called Mile 8, where his steward Brynja Salk keeps the taxes humane and his former captain Torkel Vask quietly organizes veterans who think Mocus should rule by fear. Azhourery has recently sent a message through a dead courier: the old famine was only the first test, and the brothers must meet before their father's buried engine wakes.

Role in the story

A near-mythic ruler who can serve as a formidable ally, a political obstacle, or the apparent final enemy before the truth about his brother and father emerges. His physical power is enormous, but his real conflict is whether he can break the inherited cycle of divine authority and public sacrifice.

“His younger brother Azhourery was called the god himself even while they were children: priests said the boy's shadow pointed toward tomorrow.”
From their background
Faction
King of the Duuran dominion and guardian of Mile 8; custom setting faction

Known connections

Brynja Salk, his sharp-minded steward, manages Mile 8 and is the one person who can tell him his arithmetic is wrong.
Torkel Vask, his former captain, wants him to abandon restraint and establish a permanent military crown.
Azhourery, his brother and the figure worshipped as a god, has reappeared in secret correspondence.
The families of the Ninth Survey famine survivors still send him small offerings of grain at the winter solstice.
Major secret · GM only
Minor secrets · GM only

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