Rhogar Ccoriq
Rhogar Ccoriq
At the table
“unpaid treason.”
Voice
A low, resonant baritone with a dry furnace rasp. His words vibrate faintly in metal objects nearby, and when he is frightened or enraged, his voice loses its warmth and becomes almost soundless.
His speech is clipped, measured, and unusually precise. Each sentence lands with the weight of a stamped order. He pronounces names carefully, including foreign names, and leaves a small silence after important facts. When grief breaks through his discipline, his voice becomes softer and his Draconic consonants lengthen into a low metallic rasp.
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How to play them
Rhogar begins by testing whether visitors understand consequences. He asks for names, origin points, travel purpose, and the last three places they slept. Honest answers earn practical assistance, while evasions bring confinement or escort under guard. He respects competence more than charm, but privately watches for kindness toward servants, recruits, and frightened strangers. Characters who prove they can protect civilians may gain his cooperation even if they openly criticize his orders.
Goal
Keep the Smoldering Gate secure until he can determine who is manipulating the quarantine orders and why travelers are vanishing inside the Whispering Ash Exclusion Zone.
Motivation
Rhogar wants to preserve human lives in a system that measures success by sealed gates, clean reports, and obedient silence.
Appearance
Rhogar stands like a gatehouse given breath, his heavy brass scales mottled with charcoal soot and dull green oxidation along the joints. His movements are economical, each step planted with the certainty of a weight lowered by a crane. The unexpected softness of his hands draws the eye, because he handles frightened recruits, cracked cups, and wounded birds with the same patient care he brings to a shield wall. His breathing usually sounds like a bellows working behind a closed door, but when anger rises, the rhythm becomes frighteningly quiet. The air around his nostrils warms, carrying the scent of hot coins and bitter smoke.
Clothing
Dark-iron plate mail beneath a weatherproof oilskin cloak, reinforced riding boots, a red quarantine sash worn under the breastplate, and a battered brass gorget marked with the gate's three vertical sigils
Body language
Rhogar keeps his shoulders square and his shield angled slightly forward, even during conversation. His left thumb repeatedly rubs the worn leather grip of a small signal baton. When calm, his breathing is audible and regular. When rattled, he stops breathing for several heartbeats, then releases a thin stream of smoke through his teeth.
- Height
- 6 feet 8 inches
- Build
- Broad-shouldered and dense, with the compact strength of someone built for shield work rather than parade-ground display
- Eyes
- Deep amber, with narrow pupils that contract to black slits in bright light
- Hair
- Short, coarse black hair threaded with brass-gold strands, usually singed flat beneath his helm
- Skin
- Brass-gold scales darkened by charcoal soot, with muted copper along the jaw, knuckles, and throat
- Age
- Forty-seven years old
- Gender
- Male
- Size
- Medium
Distinguishing features
Personality
17 traits and drivesRhogar is pragmatic, vigilant, and brutally consistent in public, yet privately sentimental about small acts of care. He believes rules are tools meant to protect people, but repeated exposure to treachery has made him suspicious of anyone who speaks about compassion without accepting responsibility. With subordinates, he is demanding but protective. With officials, he is courteous and immovable. With civilians, he becomes unexpectedly patient, especially when they are frightened. When furious, he grows quieter rather than louder, and the warmth in his breath vanishes until his words sound cold enough to cut.
- Alignment
- Lawful Neutral
Quirks
Habits
Traits · 4
Flaws · 5
Fears · 4
Wants and needs · 4
Combat
AC 20 · HP 154 · 30 feetRhogar fights as an anchor, not a duelist. He places himself between enemies and the nearest vulnerable ally, uses Shield Bash and Trip Attack to control movement, and spends Commander's Strike to turn disciplined soldiers into a single coordinated weapon. He saves Sleepfire Breath for clustered intruders or moments when his line is about to break. If forced into retreat, he withdraws by prepared stages, leaving caltrops, locked gates, and ordered crossfire behind him.
Rhogar Ccoriq
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Equipment
- Gatewarden Tower Shield (shield)A reinforced dark-iron tower shield bearing the triple-gate emblem of the Smoldering Gate Garrison. It is scarred by claw marks and polished smooth where Rhogar's forearm rests.
- Cinderwake Warhammer (weapon)A heavy iron-bound warhammer with a brass striking face and a counterweight designed for close-quarters fighting in narrow basalt passages.
- Garrison Plate (armor)Dark-iron plate fitted with heat-resistant lining and layered joints for fighting in volcanic gorges.
- Three-Signal Baton (tool)A brass signal baton containing colored ash powders for coded flashes, smoke marks, and emergency flare commands.
- Border Ledger (wondrous item)A sealed field ledger recording patrol rotations, quarantine orders, missing persons, and every civilian granted passage through the gate.
- Commander's Field Kit (adventuring gear)Six packets of ash-filter cloth, two healer's kits, manacles, caltrops, and a ring of twelve gate keys.
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Background
Rhogar was born in a lower Ashport Reach barracks to a dragonborn mother who served as a signal officer and a human father who repaired harbor winches. He learned early that the border was not a line on a map but a collection of tired people, sealed doors, missing wagons, and orders that arrived too late. At nineteen, he joined the Aethelgard legions and became known for memorizing the names of every sentry under his command. His formative experience came during the Cinder Fog Lockdown, when a concealed contamination breach forced him to seal a gate with civilians still outside. Rhogar obeyed, but spent the following three days digging survivors from the cooled ash by hand. That event made him unflinching about quarantine and quietly distrustful of commanders who never stand near the gates they close. He rose through gorge defense, convoy protection, and counter-smuggling operations before assuming command of the Smoldering Gate Garrison. Now he balances military orders from the Ironscale Marches against the desperate needs of travelers seeking passage through the Whispering Ash Exclusion Zone.
Role in the story
Rhogar is a formidable gatekeeper, reluctant ally, and potential investigator for adventures involving the Whispering Ash Exclusion Zone. He may initially obstruct the party under quarantine law, then recruit them to uncover forged orders, missing prisoners, or a hidden route beneath the garrison. His central conflict forces the characters to decide whether security without transparency can still be called protection.
“At nineteen, he joined the Aethelgard legions and became known for memorizing the names of every sentry under his command.”
- Faction
- Supreme commander of the Smoldering Gate Garrison, sworn officer of Aethelgard's border legions, and a reluctant operational contact of the Whispering Ash intelligence network
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