Edward Pickles
Edward Pickles
At the table
Voice
His voice has a dry, slightly rasping edge, like someone who has spent years speaking over the scrape of papers and the hiss of a coal grate. He enunciates names carefully and tends to breathe in through his nose before answering questions about the family.
Edward speaks in carefully assembled sentences, with the clipped precision of a man accustomed to copying letters and checking details. His vocabulary is plain, but he remembers exact dates and turns of phrase. When upset, he speaks faster and more directly, not more softly.
Speech patterns
How to play them
Edward responds best to patience and concrete facts. He will share mundane household details readily, but questions about Alice or the vigil make him test the questioner's motives. Show that you will protect Mary from needless scandal, and he may reveal the letter.
Goal
Find out whether Alice's death was truly an accident without driving Mary and Oswin away.
Motivation
Grief has left Edward wanting both certainty and the comfort of being wrong. He searches for the truth because he cannot bear the thought that the family has built its mourning on a lie.
Appearance
Edward Pickles is a narrow, stick-like man who seems to have been assembled from long joints and a coat hanger. His pale-blond hair lies in fine, straight strands, usually flattened on one side from a night spent at a desk. Green eyes keep moving to doors, windows, and the faces of people who have not yet spoken. He smells faintly of damp wool, cold fireplace ash, and the sharp medicinal soap he uses to try to scrub away the smell of the household. He walks with a quick, careful hitch in his shoulders, as though expecting someone to call him back. The unexpected detail: he keeps a tiny tin of sugared violets in his waistcoat and offers one to anyone who looks close to tears.
Clothing
A carefully brushed but old dark-brown suit, a high-collared cream shirt, and a waistcoat with a small pocket for sugared violets. His cuffs are often dusted with ash from the household grate.
Body language
He angles his thin frame toward the nearest exit while pretending to attend fully. When comfortable, he leans forward and becomes unexpectedly animated; when suspicion takes hold, he stills completely and watches the speaker's mouth.
- Height
- 5 ft. 9 in.
- Build
- Lithe and stick-like, with narrow shoulders and long limbs
- Eyes
- Green
- Hair
- Pale blond
- Skin
- Pale, with a faint gray cast from too many sleepless nights
- Age
- 32
- Gender
- Man
- Size
- Medium
Distinguishing features
Personality
12 traits and drivesEdward is observant and considerate, yet his care curdles into suspicion when he senses evasion. In ordinary company he is dryly funny and quick to offer practical help. Around the family he becomes guarded, choosing each word as though it might be used against someone he loves. When tired, he grows blunt and lets old grief speak through him.
- Alignment
- Neutral; guarded by grief, but not cruel
Quirks
Habits
Traits · 3
Flaws · 3
Fears · 3
Wants and needs · 3
Combat
AC 10 · HP 4 · 30 ft.Edward is a noncombatant. He avoids fighting, uses furniture or doorways to keep distance, and tries to escape or call for help. If cornered, he swings his walking stick once to create space, then flees.
Edward Pickles
Actions
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Equipment
- Walking stick (simple weapon)A plain ashwood stick used for support and, in desperation, as a weapon.
- Tin of violets (personal item)A small tin containing sugared violets, often given away one at a time.
- Unanswered letter (clue)A folded, unsigned letter written in a hand he believes resembles Alice's.
Possessions
Background
Edward Pickles grew up as Mary's other brother in a household where affection was often expressed through errands, practical help, and silence. He learned early to notice what people avoided saying. When Alice died, the family grief turned the house into a place of hushed arguments and unfinished meals. On Halloween, Edward kept vigil with Oswin Hirst, sitting beside the body until dawn because neither could bear to leave the other alone. During that long night, he heard Oswin say a name that Oswin later insisted he had never spoken. Edward has never decided whether grief made him mishear it. He now handles correspondence and small household tasks, trying to keep the family functioning while privately watching for signs that Alice's death was not as simple as the family claims. He remains close to Mary, though his suspicion makes their conversations brittle, and he worries that Oswin's companionship that night concealed something important. His current problem is an unsigned letter that arrived in Alice's handwriting, asking him to come alone to the family house on the next Halloween.
Role in the story
A grieving family member and cautious source of information whose private suspicion can lead the party toward a mystery surrounding Alice's death. He can become an ally if treated with patience, or an obstacle if pressed to accuse his family without evidence.
“He learned early to notice what people avoided saying.”
- Faction
- The Pickles household; no formal faction
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